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With out you by ~Zebsaz:iconZebsaz:

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The days have gotten longer
The nights have gotten colder
I cry in my sleep for you
Why did you have to leave so soon?
I still need you now i dont feel like myself
But then i think of how happy you are now
Knowing your with grandma and everyone else
But it still hurts me knowing your gone
I wont get anymore of your letter's
I wont hear you'r voice ever agian
But at least i have the memories of us together
I want you to know i still love you alway and forever
©2005-2008 ~Zebsaz
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i wrote this when i was goin through my grandfathers passing on november 6 and i also wrote it for my grandmother who died three years before him
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~Zebsaz:iconZebsaz: Apr 14, 2005, 7:34:27 PM
Okay yes i know its not the best in the world....:sigh:

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Caboose: I don't understand... Are Are you hungry? Tucker are you hungry? Are you cold? Do you need a blanket? Tucker do you want some hot dogs and a blanket?
~inusgirl884:iconinusgirl884: Apr 15, 2005, 5:21:39 AM
Sissy where you get dis one? I wounder *thinks sadly* You never showed meh *runs away and cries* WHAAAAA!!!!!!! *stops and thinks* Ok umm.,......... *looks around at eyes on her....ummmm......HI *trying to act normal *thinks to self* wait....am I ever normal?

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Bob: How many ADD kids does it take to screw in a lightbuld?
Fred: I don't know how many?
Bob: Wanna play basebase?
~Zebsaz:iconZebsaz: Apr 17, 2005, 7:40:50 AM
no your never normal sis and i did show this one to you

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Caboose: I don't understand... Are Are you hungry? Tucker are you hungry? Are you cold? Do you need a blanket? Tucker do you want some hot dogs and a blanket?
~Doughnut-Tengu:iconDoughnut-Tengu: May 3, 2005, 5:01:20 PM
Aww, sorry for your loss, its good to remember :hug:

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TENGU DO
~Zebsaz:iconZebsaz: May 3, 2005, 6:08:20 PM
thanx, i know

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Caboose: I don't understand... Are Are you hungry? Tucker are you hungry? Are you cold? Do you need a blanket? Tucker do you want some hot dogs and a blanket?
~lildemon:iconlildemon: Jul 26, 2005, 5:22:23 PM
it is one of the greates i've ever seen in you work of writing poems :sadangel:
~Zebsaz:iconZebsaz: Jul 26, 2005, 5:28:15 PM
yah yah i know i write better when i m sad what can i say thanx

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Caboose: I don't understand... Are Are you hungry? Tucker are you hungry? Are you cold? Do you need a blanket? Tucker do you want some hot dogs and a blanket?
~lildemon:iconlildemon: Jul 27, 2005, 11:14:12 AM
your welcome and it dosnt matter what mood you are in to write in you just have to feel it in your heart and soul
~Zebsaz:iconZebsaz: Jul 29, 2005, 12:44:13 PM
for meh it matta's

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Caboose: I don't understand... Are Are you hungry? Tucker are you hungry? Are you cold? Do you need a blanket? Tucker do you want some hot dogs and a blanket?
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